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So today i showed my film so far to mr Andrews and he gave me some useful advice on how to make it better. The main issue I had ws with a few paticular shots.

There is  moment when the fan knocks on the door when Adriana looks around at the door and the scene cuts between her and the door. Mr andrews suggestion was, each time the scene cuts back to Adriana it gets closer to her, as if to show that there is less room in the frame and therefore less room for her to breathe, inferring that fans make her feel vulnerable. Currently my shots look like this:

as you can see it gets further away from Nicole

So Mr andrews said I should re shoot it so it is closer to Nicole and it looks like she has less space to breathe