Thursday, 18 August 2016

Feed back and re filmimg

So I showed my film to Mr Andrews in class today in order to get some feed back and decide what needs to be refilled and I got some useful advice


This is a high angle of Libby when she is mean to be the most powerful one in this image, as you can see she is already the biggest think in this image due to the positioning of the people behind her, she has just sent Adriana to jail for a crime that she herself committed, I think she should be looking a little more powerful than she is


Adriana doesn't really follow the rule of thirds in this image and there is no real reason to break that rule


Again Adriana is very centered in this image and there is no real reason for her to br breaking the rule of thirds


Another centred shot for no reason 


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So my main issue is the entering of shots when there is no need for it. i was also told it would be much better if I used a tripod rather than a hand held camera. 

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