Today I got some feed back on my story line and found that it had many problems. The main one being it doesn't really follow the heroes journey.
Firstly there is no 'mentor character' 'call to adventure' or 'refusal of the call' essential steps of the heroes journey. On top of this her best friend Annabelle resurrects her so she sort of becomes the hero. That doesn't work in terms of the heroes journey. Ive completely changed my story and will be updating on how in the following few blog posts.
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