Feed back stuff

One suggestion I had for something to improve was to cut down the shots of the knives because there were so many different shots and I think after a while they got boring. Also an additional suggestion was to make the knife bloody to make it more realistic.

Im not sure about this suggestion because I took so many shots of the knife being washed to try to convey the message that the killer was of mental and had obsessive tendencies. She needed to wash all her knives repeatedly despite the fact she only used one. I think this is hard to convey in a short teaser trailer with only 45 seconds at most to convey the character. Also I couldn't cover the knife in blood because I don't think that would fit in with a PG rating. 

Another person suggested that the scenes were too long. I completely agree with this, to a point. I think the shots should start off slow the speed up towards the end to build some effective tension. At the moment my trailer starts slow speeds up then returns to being slow.

A few people said that the the shots in the car were unrealistic, and I completely agree, you can see the background is my garage and not the street, so you can tell that the car is not actually moving. Also the steering wheel is at a strange angle that it would not be in if the car was actually moving, and in this scene the car is meant to be moving. I will definitely need to reshoot the car scenes.

Another person said that they saw my mum breathing when she was meant to look dead, I will have to re shoot this.