Conferencing

Improvements

- I want to show that my killer is twisted, obsessive and insane. So I decided that we will film some shots of the killer, after she 'kills' her victim. After she kills her victim they will be slumped messily on the floor, and the killer will straighten her legs, place her arms in her laps and fix her dress to show that she is insane, obsessive, a neat freak and pedantic.

- I also need to show the victim putting up some sort of a fight against the killer as, no one just allows the killer to strangle them. Im thinking of getting some shots of the victims arms flailing wildly, while the killer pulls the scarf tighter around the neck and then the victims hand dropping dramatically to the floor to represent that she has been murdered.

- I also need to get some more shots of the killer walking up and downstairs and out to the car to just establish the location a bit more and make the story make more sense.

- In the two shots of the knives I have the tea towel that they are lying on is taking up most of the shot, so I think I will have to re shoot these shots with the knives taking up most of the shot, as they re the most important aspects of this shot.