Feed back

We received a lot of feedback after showing mr andrews part of our film we got some information on on some basic stuff that was pretty easy to fix. One of the things was the rule of thirds. Many of our shots are quite centred with no reason for them to be so it would be a good idea if we rs hot or just though about re cropping some certain shots. Another thing is scene 3. It follows on from scene two which was filmed at night and we filmed scene three during the day so there is serious continuity errors there. As well as this a lot of the shots are really dodgy and we have these white walls in the background which give the shot little depth. The scene has a lot of potential and we don't want it to be ruined by bad filming so we decided to reshoot this. As well as this the room is mean to be darker and more shadowy but the room just isn't. We were thinking we could do some cool perspective shots from the table with the wine glasses and film through them.