Playing the game --> our idea finalised

So after much deliberation, planning and brainstorming we have finally come up with a set idea for our film, and the set characters. Here is the updated series of events;

Action	Location/props	Lines
Charlie is in their car driving down a dark street. They reads a document in a folder and look at a file about The Father. They talk into their tape recorder. They puts the tape recorder away and walk out into the darkness of a street to investigate	(Street in Tedder avenue)  Document on Father Bella’s mums car	“0240 hours. Wednesday morning,  July 13th, 2014… Potential criminal suspect has made their way to Grim Lane, goes by the name of …. “
Charlie is hiding in the darkness. Pull focus to father who is talking to an assassin and hanging him a profile.	(Street in Tedder avenue)  Document on father Document on Max Patterson	“Max Patterson. 30 years old. Some say that he almost found our spot, so we’re suspicious. Just kill him.”
Father gets in his car, drives away. Detective gets in her car and follows him. Slow subtle car chase	(Street in Tedder avenue)  Bella’s mums car Libbys dads car
Establishing shots of the money being made cut between click of boss’s heels and clicking of the money being made. Detective walks in someone hands her a shirt. Employer grabs her places her in a work bench. King walks in. King examines a bill and starts shouting at a employer for bad quality. Anna walks in and uses feminine charm to get the king to shop shouting at employer.	(Basement of Bella’s parents office)	“Hurry up, you’re late. Nice disguise, but its first day in business. Learn to be more prompt.” "Don’t say a word.”
Cut shots between detectives eyes and suspicious business. Detective looks over at another employee who looks sternly back at her noticing that she is not working. Ana comes and slams her hand on detectives desk after seeing detective not doing any work.	(Basement of Bella parents office)	“hey! Get back to work.”
So detective gets in her car talks into her tape recorder drives home. Detective takes brief case out of her car about what she has been investigating. When she gets home her door is already open and Anna is sitting in the living room sitting in a chair holding a martini. lDetective hides her briefcase discretely that she had brought in rom her car. Detective goes to reach for a gun. Anna uses her feminine charms to get detective to research the king.	Libbys living room	“TI want to find out more about the king and your going to hell me”
Anna uses her feminine charm to convince detective to investigate the kings. Detective eyes Anna then goes and pours a drink.  Anna throws detective badge at her feet clatters to represent that she knows that she is a detective working against the company. Detective realises that she cant be the good guy anymore. She has to help  Anna get in power or be assassinated. Detective raises glass and sculls it knowing this will be hard. She doesn't want to do this.	Libbys living room	“I want to find blackmail on him.” “I WONT TELL (KING) if you don’t”
Detective is working at the company eyes Anna. Anna eyes her back. They are both working.  Ana puts a note on desk with coordinates and writing that says come alone.	Garage of bells parents building
Detective walks past Ana and passes her a file that has the (KINGS) name on it and a photo f her.	Somewhere dark and dingy
Detective is talking into a tape recorder in her/his car lots of shots of anna and detective exchanging eye contact, papers, and files meeting at certain locations, and the king getting suspicious and starting to find clues. Ana sends people who are going to be assassinated next a ‘death ring’ and after assassination or hit ring is returned to the company for the next person.	Detecives car	“I’ve been working on this project for 3 months. I’ve dug myself into this whole. *explain stuff that is happening*”
The king finds different coordinates and realises whats happening then sends a coordinate to the detective and Ana and they think that they have sent it to each other so they all meet at the same place. He also sends the ring to the detective.	many different locations
Detective Anna King all meet. Anna asks detective where he got that ring King pulls out a gun and shoots detective. then pulls Anna away. Slow motion of her shocked face and emotions. fade out.		“Where did you get that ring”