Tuesday, 17 November 2015

0:00:00 - 1:10:22 —> Minnie

1:10:22 - 2:35:24 —> Nicole

2:35:24 - 4:01:13 —> Bella
Year 11 Film, Television and New Media Film Noir Style Production 
Self-reflection and evaluation:
Please answer each question using complete sentences, including as much detail as possible.
  1. Discuss your feelings about the production task: Please justify your responses:
  • Are you satisfied with the result? (i.e. did it turn out as well as you hoped?)
I am satisfied with the final result for the amount of time we had and the elements of film noir and the original story. I think due to our organisation and amount of times that we re shot and tried to perfect our shots allowed it to turn out as well as I hoped. 

  • Did the project require more/less time than you originally thought?
This project required way more time than I originally thought due to the amount of times we had to film then re film and write and rewrite voice overs and the shortlists. 

  • Would like to change or improve any aspects of your final film (storyline, shots, editing etc.)?
I know its not possible with this task but iI wish we could have had a longer amount of time (as in more than four minutes) for the film as film noir story lines, especially ours is very complex and I feel that it would be even clearer if our film could be longer but thats okay.

  • If you could start the project again, what would you do differently?
I think our group can get a bit excited and creative in terms of ideas and we immediately come up with the most complex and crazy storylines. I think we could have saved time if we could just simplify our ideas a bit more and not gone so wild with ideas then we could have had more time for planning pre production an essentially filming and editing in general. Not that we didn't have enough time for this but I guess you can never have enough time for these sorts of things. 

  1. As this task focused on the Film Noir Style, describe: 
  • How you used specific elements of mise-en-scene to depict your film’s genre and enhance the narrative? 
Props/costumes
  • We had many costumes that fit the idea of the characters in film noir. Our detective wore something that fit her character, a long trench coat, with minimal makeup and hair and a badge.
  • Our femme fatal Anna was dressed like one definitely with a tight dress and winged eyeliner often she looked like she fit the bill of a femme fatal. 
  • We used a gun which is an effective prop as there is almost always murder in film noir. 
  • We used fake money to reinforce the idea of illegal activity in the underbelly of society.Illegal activity is often a central part in film noir. 

Lighting
  • We used a lot of different film noir lighting styles such as long sharp shadows, satchelled shadowy faces and filming through venetian blinds. 

Setting
  • The set of the business very much fits the style of film noir. It is an illegal underground company. Film noir often is based off crime and illegal activity. The setting is very dark and very shadowy making it look like a shady place. The setting is also an area in the middle of an urban jungle in the midst of a city. This fits the style well. 

Characters
  • The character of Charlie is a central type of character that is often used in film noir. She is a detective and someone who had good intentions but got dragged into an illegal business and shady activities. 
  • Anna is the classic example of a femme fatal she is shamelessly evil and is in alliance with no one but herself. She double crosses both Anna and Veronica to get exactly what she wants. 
  • Veronica is a corrupt authority who knows what she is doing is illegal but does it anyway because it makes her rich. 

  • How you used specific shot types to convey the story using visual language?
  • We used many long shots full of long sharp dark shadows to convey the style of film noir and create a shadowy, dodgy and miseries vibe . especially in scene six. 
  • We used close up shots where the face is shadowy and dark, escpecially in scene 2 and 4 in the close up shots to create a dark and shadowy mysterious vibe. 
  • We used many low angle shots of Veronica while she is covered by the light of venetian blinds to show she has power and emphasise the style of film noir. 
  • We used high angle shadowy shots of Charlie to show the style of film noir and to represent that he is the victim and is in a shady and dark situation. 

  • Whether the intended genre is depicted clearly or if this could be improved?
- I think that the intended genre is very clearly depicted through the use of these elements however i do feel that some shots don’t exactly follow all the rules of film noir and could be improved somewhat. None of the shots are perfect, there are many good ones but there is always room for improvements. 

  1. Personal reflection and evaluation: 
After your previous task, you were asked to reflect upon the project and identify aspects of planning, production and reflection, which could be improved. Please explain which aspect you chose to focus on for this task and how you have made improvements.
Last year I felt while doing my film noir assignment during the production it took way too long for our group to get started on filming and literally the day before the assignment was due we are still filming large scenes and trying to edit them in. I think this time while filming we got started really early and managed to get our film completed with enough time to edit discuss and change things. I feel that this year I have handled the production element the best. 


  1. Reflecting upon your completed task, respond to the following points:
  • How did other people respond to your rough-edit? Did you use their feedback to make changes to the film?
- There were some elements of our rough edit that needed to be changed. Mr Andrews told us that e could change the shots in scene three to make it more interesting and follow more rules. We took this advice and tried to follow the rule of thirds more and film some more interesting shots. (like for example filming through glass) 
  • Did your group use the planning and analysis tools effectively? (ingredients list, storyboards, shot lists).
I feel we did. I spent ages constructing my shot list so It was perfect and re doing it many times and updating it accordingly. It helped with filming very much as when people asked about their characters and situations I was able to tell them exactly what they were doing, where they were and why they were there so they could play the character well. 
  • Were there any problems or difficulties during filming and how did this affect your project. (Difficulties may include; shooting, technical, time-management, teamwork, absences or editing etc.);
I think there wasn't any problem during filming so much as there was with pre production. The only problems we had with filming were involved with people having work or prior commitments and not being able to come to filming. The problems lay more in pre production as we tend to get way too excited about our ideas and come up with ideas that are too complicated to execute and we end up using precious time simplifying our ideas. 
  • Discuss whether you undertook adequate and detailed reflection to support your work? (Look at your blogs and consider if it looks like a terms worth of work);

I definitely think I took adequate reflection on my blogs. I reflected after every time we filmed and explained why we filmed each shot how we filmed it. 

Sunday, 15 November 2015

The last scene

yesterday we finished our last scene for this film which felt awesome! It was so greta to finally have this film done. We wanted to film scene 1 near this little alleyway down libby's street. It wasn't very dark but I reduced the saturation when editing so it looked dark.

Scene one (our last scene finished) Shots and why


Shot: Mid shot to show both the location and Charlie and what she is doing in good detail. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on to show that Charlie has equal power with the hit men she is watching as they have the power to kill but at this point of the film she has the power to expose them. 


Shot: Close up to show Charlie's thoughtful expression as she listens to the conversation between a worker and hitman. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on to show that Charlie has equal power with the hit men she is watching as they have the power to kill but at this point of the film she has the power to expose them. 


Shot: extreme close up to show in detail that Charlie is about to take notes on what is happening. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Slightly high


Shot: Close up to leave the worker in some form of mystery

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: straight on


Shot: Extreme close up to show Charlie's thoughtful expression

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle:  Straight on 


Shot: Close up to leave the worker in some form of mystery

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: straight on



Shot: Extreme close up to show Charlie's thoughtful expression

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle:  Straight on 



Shot: Mid shot to show the characters and location in fairly good detail. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on to represent at this point the two characters have equal power


Shot: Mid shot to show both Charlie and the dark and sketchy location in some detail

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on, Charlie is not yet vulnerable


Shot: Close up to keep this worker somewhat mysterious in this back of head shot. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on she is neither powerful or weak (She's an irrelevant character)



Shot: Mid shot to show both Charlie and the dark and sketchy location in some detail

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on, Charlie is not yet vulnerable


Shot: Close up to keep this worker somewhat mysterious in this back of head shot. 

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on she is neither powerful or weak (She's an irrelevant character)


Shot: Extreme close up to show how Charlie is extremely invested in recording all the information she can on what she has heard

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on angle


Shot: Mid shot to show both Charlie and the dark and sketchy location in some detail

Lighting: Dark and shadowy to represent that this is a shady and creepy location

Angle: Straight on, Charlie is not yet vulnerable

Sunday, 8 November 2015

Recording voice overs

Today we started to record voice overs. It's pretty handy because Minnie has a good little microphone that records them with really good quality, I think it's called a snow ball microphone or something. We have a good method of recording voice overs. Minnie had to record her part today as to be honest she does most of the talking in this film. She plugged her headphones into the computer so she could hear the audio we captured on the video and she could listen to it while recording to make sure her timing was right. The good thing about using the headphones is that the mic  doesn't pick it up so she knows she is in time with the video

Friday freak out

So today I found out I had uploaded my files to Final Cut Pro completely wrong! So what I did was create a new folder for the good and bad shots of each scene. That's not what you do, apparently it can corrupt your entire file or project your working on. So that's not good news basically. So this weekend I had to basically start over with sorting out the files. They were already sorted on my desktop into good and bad clips but I just needed to upload them again. I sorted out final cut and actually managed to get rid of all the folders I had created. We were worried that by doing that it would corrupt the final film but I knew it wouldn't as the whole film was already saved in iMovie and everyone has the shots on their laptops. I knew if something terrible happened we could just transfer the film from iMovie to Final Cut Pro and be alright. So I got rid of all the folders that were cluttering up the project and I made a new folder titles FTV and a new event titled film noir and under that event I uploaded each of the shots sorted into good and bad and labelled with the scene names. Finally I sorted out a disaster situation.

Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Muzzle flashes

This is hard to do. So apparently there is a muzzle flash when someone fires a gun in a film, and in our film noir a gun is fired two times so I had to look up how to create a muzzle flash. I recommend this tutorial: http://www.premiumbeat.com/blog/final-cut-pro-x-video-tutorial-muzzle-flashes/

Im not quite there yet and the muzzle flash looks really odd still. But these are the steps Ive taken so far to try to make it look kinda realistic.

What I did


I clicked the little icon on the side next to the T (text sign) and selected elements as you can see


I then selected shapes 


And then dragged it over to the part I wanted to make it look like Minnie shot Nicole 


I then changed the outline colour to white as this is a black and white film noir. 


I then select the shape and the little box below the image (transform) to be able to change its size and shape


I then selected distort so I could change the shape of the flash


I then changed it to an oval like shape. 


I then selected the thingy next to the camera and music icon and selected directional


This allows you to blur the shape. 


I blurred the shape but Im still not satisfied with how it looks.

Ive been arranging, lately all the shots we have gathered into final cut pro and have arranged them into good and bad shots for each scene. I think we are really organised as we only have one more scene to film which is pretty great!


Sunday, 1 November 2015


Lighting is extremely dark and mysterious. this gives the impact that Anna is watching Charlie from inside the house, so she doesn't know that Anna is inside. Slightly high angle to make Charlie look vulnerable and foreshadow that she will die. Mid shot to get the detail of the window, Annas shadow looking out and Anna outside the window. 


Shadowy lighting and glow of overhead lamp to represent that it is night time and Charlie is outside. The lighting inside is dark to represent that Anna is inside. Straight on angle, close up show to show Charlie's concern. 

Extreme close up to show Charlie reaching for her gun in detail, high angle, Shadowy lighting and glow of overhead lamp to represent that it is night time.



Shadowy lighting and glow of overhead lamp to represent that it is night time and Charlie is outside. The lighting inside is dark to represent that Anna is inside, slightly high angle to represent that Charlie is vulnerable. mid shot to show both Charlie and location. Slightly canted angle to represent that Charlie's life is about to get hard. 



Shadowy lighting as Anna enters the doorway. Bright shadowy lighting in the room to enforce that Anna has switched the lights on inside now that Charlie is inside. Slightly canted straight on angle to represent that Charlie's life is about to get hard. Long shot so that you can see Charlie entering the room and it gives her room to get closer. 


Close up and high angle to show Charlie placing the gun back in his pocket in detail, dark shadowy lighting as Charlie is still standing in the doorway.


Shadowy lighting as Anna enters the doorway. Bright shadowy lighting in the room to enforce that Anna has switched the lights on inside now that Charlie is inside. Slightly canted straight on angle to represent that Charlies life is about to get hard. Long shot so that you can see Charlie entering the room and it gives her room to get closer. 


Slightly canted straight on angle to represent that Charlies life is about to get hard, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC, Long shot to show both Charlie and Anna. 



Shadowy lighting as Anna enters the doorway. Bright shadowy lighting in the room to enforce that Anna has switched the lights on inside now that Charlie is inside. Slightly canted high angle to represent that Charlies life is about to get hard and to foreshadow that she is venerable. Long shot so that you can see Charlie entering the room and it gives her room to get closer. 



Low angle to show that Anna is in power in the situation, mid shot to show both Anna in the frame and the pool balls, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Mid shot to get both characters and the location in the shot, straight on angle, canted shot to show that Charlie's life is about to be turned upside down, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Close up of pool balls this symbolises a game being played the same way Anna is playing a game with Charlie. It is a significant part of this scene. High angle, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Straight on angle, close up to get Charlie's face in detail and so that Anna is bigger on screen representing that she is more powerful,  Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Low angle to represent that Anna is powerful, mid shot, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC



High angle to show the badge in detail, Close up to show the badge in detail, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


High angle to show the badge in detail, Close up to show the badge in detail, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


High angle shot to make Charlie look weaker, mid shot to get Annas head in the frame and capture a perspective shot, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC



High angle to show the badge in detail, Close up to show the badge in detail, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC



High angle shot to make Charlie look weaker, mid shot to get Annas head in the frame and capture a perspective shot, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Close up of pool balls this symbolises a game being played the same way Anna is playing a game with Charlie. It is a significant part of this scene. High angle, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Mid shot, straight on angle High angle to show the badge in detail, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


Mid shot to get both characters and the location in the shot, straight on angle, canted shot to show that Charlie's life is about to be turned upside down, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC



Mid shot, straight on angle High angle to show the badge in detail, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC


High angle to make Charlie look vulnerable, Close up to get the two characters facial expressions in the frame in detail, Low angle to represent that Anna is powerful, mid shot, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spin straw INC



Low angle to represent that Anna is powerful, mid shot, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC



Close up to show that alcohol is being poured in detail, straight on angle, Bright shadowy lighting in Charlie's house to represent that it is a very different place than Spinstraw INC